trying to get back into writing | hacki's Blog


it has been a few month since i tried to write down some lines that were not meant to be some simple lyrics and now we have saturday morning here was a bit bored and just started to hack some words into my keyboard

so viele wege beschritten
um doch nur dich zu finden
so viele schlachten bestritten
um dich fest an mich zu binden
nur die rose die deinen namen trägt
werde ich wohl niemals brechen
so habe ich mich nun zur ruhe gelegt
an meiner seite das ewige versprechen
das ich einst so töricht aussprach
und nur diesem einst, trauere ich nach


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Posted on 11:04AM on Sep 27th, 2009
Bittersweet... "toricht" is a bit strong. I'm not sure I got understood properly the lines, "nur die rose die deinen namen trägt; werde ich wohl niemals brechen... " but it might be a very personal and even secret reference. Thank you for sharing this... AP
Posted on 11:05AM on Sep 27th, 2009
You must NEVER stop writing poetry, whether in German or English, okay?
Posted on 11:49AM on Sep 27th, 2009
i guess it's time for another geman lesson: eine blume brechen = archaic for plucking a flower, it could be seen as a sexual reference, it's left to the reader wether it is or not ;) and don't you worry i'm the self declared band leader of "ferrets on fire" so there might even be some songs coming from me in the future
Posted on 11:53AM on Sep 27th, 2009
Aahhhhh... thank you Hacki. :)
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